If they can even be called stories..
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As the door opened and people walked in, a bouquet of outrageous perfumes of the women mixed with the sweat, fear and competition of the men saturated the air. The smells swirled potently under the garish lights and heightened the suffocative feeling of the place.
It was the last time she visited that eatery.
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They met over a lunch. Not alone, there were several chaperones. It was a business lunch afterall. He was struck by her presence soon as he saw her. Their first words to each other were “Hello” (hers) and “Are you married?” (his).
And that was how their love story started.
4 responses to “Very short stories”
Galadriel
June 4th, 2008 at 22:37
Well done!
Rachana
June 10th, 2008 at 05:37
made me go awwwwww!!…. tht was just soo soo sweet!!
Keep Writing more such “feel good” ones!… u just happened to brighten up my day, dearie! 🙂
Take Care
rayshma
June 10th, 2008 at 16:44
what happened next… eh?
alice-in-wonder
June 11th, 2008 at 22:24
Thanks All.
Glad to have made your day, Rach. 🙂
N Raysh… I will have to sit and imagine what happened next.. sounds too laborious a process to me. 😀